For example, look at these two profiles: 1) I’m the class clown among my friends.
I’m really good at making people laugh, and like to have a good time.
She was messy; her clothes weren't perfect, her room wasn't perfect, all of her, down to her soul, even that was messy.
But it was a messy I could handle even when I couldn't handle my own.
I’m looking for a partner that communicates openly, with integrity and candor.” Changes Based on Getting-To-Know-You Phone Call During our phone conversation the gentleman mentioned his grandmother a few times and what it meant to grow up with her in their home. There was no need to describe his physical-self in his profile since he had a good quality, recent picture. During our conversation she made it clear that at this time in her life, raising her two daughters was her priority.
While she was not looking for marriage, she realized she missed adult conversation and hadn’t seen a movie with a rating over “G” in 3 years.
So, lets look at a few typical examples of bad profiles: “I am not good at writing about myself, but my friends say that I am intelligent, professional, educated and ambitious. I am looking to a meet an intelligent, beautiful woman for dating and relationship.” – at first, this looks like a well-written profile by a guy who seems to have head on his shoulders. There is nothing “catchy” about this profile – there is nothing that would compel a reader to stop and respond to it.
However, it has one major flaw that will make many women skip over it. Lets look at another bad profile: “I went to school in the east coast, but now I work for a major software company where I work up the corporate ladder. I love hiking, watching baseball, and bbq on weekends.” – the writer must be reminded that this is a dating profile – not a resume or a sales presentation in front of his human resources department. as a rule, you should never start your profile by talking about school or work, as it’s not interesting and not really relevant to what you should be trying to achieve – to catch a woman’s attention.” “I love to have fun, party, dance, and drink of my buddies.
Good writing can lead people to things you couldn’t explicitly say.
If you wanna hang out sometimes, holler at me…” – unless you are in a fraternity, you should never come across as someone who has nothing else to him but getting drunk and leading a lifestyle devoid of any real goals or ambition.
Now, lets look at an example of a profile that will stand out through both the way they are written and their content.
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